Here I have gathered more audience feedback with regards to my music video.
This is the first draft for my magazine advert. I think this idea works well as it is simple yet effective and has the basic relevant information for an advert. However, there are things I would like to change, such as manipulating the image more in Photoshop.
This is my audience feedback on my first music video draft. This was carried out by an A2 media student, Aimee Smith. She watched my video and focused on what went well and what I could possibly improve on. I will take this into consideration as I develop my music video. The feedback allowed me to see what I need to improve on from an objective perspective as it can be difficult to do this to my own product.
This is the first draft of my music video. A few of my shots are out of focus so consequently I will have to re-film these shots or fill them with other shots. I am also aware I need to add variety to my music video with shots outside the black box room and will be filming in London, Camden and open spaced areas. The ending to my music video also cuts out so I will have to add a longer shot once filmed.